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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Shadows ------- Darkness grows each new day the numbing never goes away lurking in my deepest thoughts I want to run but I can not Coming from down in my soul causing pain wherever it goes sinking teeth at any time ebbing life away from mine I would fight if I knew how I can see them coming now not even the power from above can stop the shadows of your love. James (PARKER) Haley 011392 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Shadows indeed - and this is quite chilling - well done. K |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well done, James. You made me feel the pain of what it must be like. Denise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
James, those shadows I have felt and seen , one day at a time , look forward  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James - Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HALEYJA, One day at a time, nice line. Enjoyed the read. |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Nice job and very strong.Thanx for sharing God Bless |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"not even the power from above can stop the shadows of your love. " Nice |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Severn, Denise, whiskey, Marge, Seymour, SnglDad and Hoot_owl.... those shadows are gone now, just sweet memories. James (Parker) |
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