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Parker
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0 posted 2000-01-10 12:33 PM


Shadows                            
-------                            
                                    
Darkness grows each new day        
the numbing never goes away        
lurking in my deepest thoughts      
I want to run but I can not        
                                    
Coming from down in my soul        
causing pain wherever it goes      
sinking teeth at any time          
ebbing life away from mine          
                                    
I would fight if I knew how        
I can see them coming now            
not even the power from above      
can stop the shadows of your love.  
                                    
James (PARKER) Haley 011392



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Severn
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1 posted 2000-01-10 08:11 PM


Shadows indeed - and this is quite chilling - well done.

K

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-10 08:18 PM


Well done, James. You made me feel the pain of what it must be like.

 Denise


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3 posted 2000-01-10 09:24 PM


James, those shadows I have felt and seen , one day at a time , look forward  
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-01-10 09:47 PM


James -

Nicely done.
~*Marge*~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-01-10 09:52 PM


HALEYJA,
One day at a time, nice line. Enjoyed the read.

SnglDad
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6 posted 2000-01-10 09:55 PM


Nice job and very strong.Thanx for sharing


 God Bless


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-01-11 08:26 AM


"not even the power from above      
can stop the shadows of your love. "

Nice  
                                    

Parker
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8 posted 2000-01-11 11:43 AM


Thanks Severn, Denise, whiskey, Marge, Seymour, SnglDad and Hoot_owl....
those shadows are gone now, just sweet memories.

James (Parker)

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