Open Poetry #5 |
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~A Smile Of Love~ |
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Gary New Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 5Nottingham. UK |
~A Smile Of Love~ The cold wind cuts through me, as i walk to where you live, The heart inside me beats like a thousand drums. My nerves twitch with anxiety, Each step i take becomes faster. I see the light that shines from your window, It bekons me to enter. The gate has the same old squeek, As i make my way up your path. Anxious moments as my hand reaches to knock on your door, Then before i realize, you are there. A smile of love and a vision of beauty.. Im home. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Gary this is lovely, I enjoyed the read ![]() What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nice work Gary, enjoyed the read. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is lovely, Gary...very tender |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Gary! Home is where the love is! Denise |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I also like this .. kind of sneaked up on me. I don't mind that at all ! ~*Marge*~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Very nice gary-nothing like the feeling of home. kitkat |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Home is certainly special, that warm sense of belonging.. ![]() HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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