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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I know I'm a dreamer for I believe all is possible. But the day I met you there was a connection unlike anything I've ever experienced. We've talked since then, about that day. We became friends immediately, and then.. We held one another, kissed, You agreed our instantaneous "friendship" was different than the rest. I looked in your eyes, and I saw something there, between us. The passion we have is unreal. But you are pulling away from me. I see you slipping. I don't want to loose you, and I've told you so. You tell me what we have is real, but the timing is wrong. But you can't "plan" for things like this... I know that if it's meant to be It will happen.. So I'm letting you go. We'll see if you come back... |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Beautiful poem!!! sometimes its better to let go!!! ~~~if you love something, set it free if it comes back to you, its your, if it doesn't, it never was~~~ i don't know who wrote this but one of my friends gave me this poem after a breakup. |
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cokey_95 Junior Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 35 |
I am going thru this right now..nothing tuffer then letting go except the waiting to see if they come back!!!!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think your doing the right thing, no matter how hard letting go is, if it's meant to be it will always come back to you(I think that's something like the old saying goes?) So hang in there and have faith in fate!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well, I truly belive in the old saying  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I hope it works! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Tulip - you are very brave and I hope it works for you - for it is the hardest thing to do. K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
We'll see how long I can wait... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
All you can do is let him go...if he comes back, it was meant to be. I wouldn't recommend waiting around, though. Go on with your life. If you meet and fall in love with someone else, then that is what was meant to be. Great poem, Tulip! Denise |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
You're absolutely right, Dsnyder! Thanks! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Good ending on this one. Good decision too. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I know it's the only thing I CAN do. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi tulip, wait till it's seems wrong to wait anymore. tough to go through... enjoyed your poem. rus |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Trust me on this one tulip, i know from expierence that its true that if you let something go, and its ment to be, it will come back to you. I proved it with the love of my life, sometimes when you love someone enough to let them go, it proves your love more, than holding on when the time isnt right. BEautiful poem. And i know how hard that feeling of slipping away is, you feel helpless and ask yourself a thousand times what more can you do. I have been there. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thanks Amber & rus, for your words of wisdom. We'll see what happens! |
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