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I hate these days of madness yielding
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I hate these days of madness yielding |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I hate these days of madness yielding that finds the world with daggers wielding and leaves me here amidst it all. to watch as it around me falls. And in this chaos of no end my mind I know I cant defend a victim of the social clashes lies lifeless in the ageless ashes. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I must tell you again, Kevin, that I find your depths to be very unusual for one so young. I love this, and especially the last line - wow - it stuns me with its truth in a glaring spotlight of beautiful poetry. That last line is one of those rare ones I find, that I wish I had written. Thank you for sharing this one. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BRAVO!!! This sings in its rhythm Kevin and great message  Well done!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very well done Kevin! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thank you rosemary, compliments like that are what keep me writing =) you truley made me feel special |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic poem, Kevin! And of course you're special! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kevin, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
well done, kevin! i really liked this one! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderfully done, Kevin! It's nice to know I'm not the only old soul out there. I've felt like this many times in my life, and you portray it with stunning accuracy. You have true talent. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
"Madness yielding," "Ageless ashes"--I love it! You have such a gift with phrasing! |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Another good one! Simple, to the point, and eloquent. Lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I can see the images you created for all to see!! I often feel like all is falling around me including myself!! Nicely done!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You often hit with a brand new perspective on things. Most people would think to defend their bodies. You say you cannot defend your mind. How well spoken, young man Liz |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kevin, I think you have ancient wisdom in your soul. Another great poem from young Sir kevin. Parker |
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