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My Heart Sings
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My Heart Sings |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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My Heart Sings. As the Silver moon sparkles High up in the dark velvet sky Your eyes shimmer like bubbles Chasing ghostly butterflies nearby Your Aura aglow, my candlelight Your smile as pretty as fireflies I sigh, at such a mystical sight You're the rainbow in my dark skies You're the wonder of my world Whether it's real or fantasy All of my senses unfurled I am lost within your beauty My heart sings when I'm with you Let's dance forever, never apart Like tiny droplets of the morning dew Falling, gently upon my heart. Dark Angel What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is beautiful Dark Angel. . . It flows nicely, you have wonderful imagery. . . and, I just like it! The "Silver moon" and "your aura, my candlelight". . . very good. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, Thank you my friend.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is beautiful , really sets a picture in my mind, very good |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow DA - this is truly beautiful hon - well done! Huggs....... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very beautiful DA...that passionate poet in you shines very clear in this one |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
DA, this is simply superb..."your aura, my candlelight..." Oh, what a lovely line that is A really beautiful piece of work here, my friend!It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A lovely poem! Visually elegant! I like this one!  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your natural and earthen elements bring this piece to life...rhythmically resonant, pleasure to read. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
"like tiny droplets of morning dew falling on my heart"...beautiful |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful! I especially liked the last stanza! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very dreamy, very good... K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you ALL so very much for your kind and lovely comments, I do appreciate them all. It makes me happy to know you enjoyed it. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Dark Angel! So lovely! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
This is so precious, it's gorgeous. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey DA! Love how you describe this with the words you've used here. Very well done my friend! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely. Truly lovely. I liked it. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise, thank you so much ------------- RG, thank you Hon ------------- WhtDove Angel, thanks so much, glad you liked it ------------ Astraea, Thank You!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Most excellent Dark Angel... I enjoyed this one very much Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jenny Lee, thanks so much my friend havent seen you around, where ya been ? What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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