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TKHo
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 4


0 posted 2000-01-09 09:54 AM


This poem is called Friends. This is how I feel about a soon becoming close friend. Enjoy!!!!

Friends

The kind of friends we've become is special and strong,
I've been hoping for this for so long,
Wheather you just want to be friends or more,
Doesn't change the way of how I feel,
Sometimes, somethings are worth risking for,
but what I have with you is worth too much to risk for,
The note was given to stop the wonder,
Sometimes we are disparate for the meaning of relation,
We then fail to relize the simple solution,
The kind of love I feel for you is as same as you feel for me,
Being good friends is not what I want.........
It is what we both want!!!

Please tell me what you think!!!



© Copyright 2000 TKHo - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2000-01-09 10:05 AM


I think that the distance between being friends and lovers is only a breath, and if it happens, it should not ruin a friendship, if you are truly friends. Friends are forever.
This poem shows you have given it thought
Liz

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-01-10 07:44 PM


Welcome to Passions - and I simply agree with everything Liz has said - she is a wise one!


Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2000-01-10 08:12 PM


I feel the same way as the above. Good poem and welcome to Passions!

 Nathan

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-10 10:07 PM


Welcome to Passions, TK! Great thoughts on friendship! Check your email!

 Denise


whiskey
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Senior Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
5 posted 2000-01-10 10:28 PM


Welcome TKHO, This is a wonderful poem on friendship, I think if you arent the best of friends before you start anything else the relationship wont work anyhow , cause alot of the time its the friendship combined with the love that makes it work those are just my thoughts anyway  
RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
6 posted 2000-01-11 08:16 PM


When you believe, you keep believing, no choice, it just is...

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


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