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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-09 09:34 AM


" Walking Home "

As I walk out in the open air
A inviting scent lingers there
Fresh flowers growing in the ground
What a beautiful smell I have found

I walk further on down the street
A wonderful sight my eyes do greet
A child playing in the sun
Smiling, laughin having fun

I see a bird up in the tree
It looks right down back at me
Sings it sweet enduring tune
To its mate to fly back soon

I see my house ,the place I call home
My dog he looks out from his dome
He runs right up and jumps on me
A happiness I always see

Home I am im in my place
Lots of love held in this space




[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-09-2000).]

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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-01-09 09:49 AM


Ah...home is where the heart is  
First__Knight
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2 posted 2000-01-09 11:44 PM


Nothing like home.....and you seem to have found one among us here  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"



Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-10 12:05 PM


Yep, there's no place like home! This is sweet, Whiskey!  

 Denise


CrazyChick
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4 posted 2000-01-10 01:12 AM


Its always great to be home!!!
Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jim Hastings
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5 posted 2000-01-10 01:18 AM


Sounds like you have found a wonderfull home.

 It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?


devina
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Cali
6 posted 2000-01-10 06:28 AM


Cute poem, you made me right at home..G* It's amazing how the simplest things can make us so much at peace!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

whiskey
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7 posted 2000-01-10 06:59 PM


Thanks everyone  
SnglDad
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8 posted 2000-01-10 07:04 PM


There`s no place like home  
Nicely done. Keep up the good work.
God Bless

Severn
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9 posted 2000-01-10 07:16 PM


Very nice, Whiskey

K

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