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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Confusion " Do you know how pale Worhtless and feelful in a strange world Unannounced, Unexplained for Scared of over friendly guests you've Brought to me Death makes angels of us all And forgives you for your sins Where we have had lives I will not go, I will not go down that road Turn back into a room of death You are here too |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you!  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
WoW Whiskey, were you reading my mind when you wrote this? Very deep and powerful word here. Great job! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Whiskey, this is Great!! looking forward to more. Welcome!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you for all your welcomes, and replies Everyone is so nice here. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Whiskey, I respond to this deeply - well done! ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Here is an oldy but a goody! How've you been? |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Paul , I have been fine just havent had alot of time to get online |
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