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Marilyn Has a Date Tonight!!
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Marilyn Has a Date Tonight!! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Our Marilyn has a date tonight! I wonder what she's doin'? She told me that it's been a while since she's done any wooin'. She's nervous as a puppy on this very special night. Marilyn's got a date. This bozo better treat her right! What is she wearing? Something sexy? Something quite demure? Perhaps a little bit of both since she's not really sure? Perhaps a little daring, showing something.....not too much To give the indication he can look but must not touch.  Will he show up in time? Will she be ready when he's there? Did he think to shine up his shoes? Does he still have his hair? Will he bring flowers or candy geared to fill her with delight? Our Marilyn's got a date tonight. He better treat her right! Where will he take her? Somewhere nice? That's what I'd like to know. Perhaps a cozy dinner, afterward a picture show? I told her "Take a laptop and send me hourly reports". I'm sad to say she answered with unprintable retorts!  Will he treat our girl with respect or will he act quite rude And buy her after-dinner drinks to put her in the mood?  She is so innocent and has been out of sorts so long She may be hesitant to act if he does something wrong! If she permits a goodnight kiss and hug when evening's through, And he tries for a little more....will she know what to do? The dating scene has changed and she's been gone for quite a while... I hope that he is smart enough to say goodnight with style. Oh, Marilyn, where are you, girl? We're waiting here for you! We need to hear details and to know you made it through. I didn't realize that you had planned to stay out late. He picked you up at seven and, well, it's already eight!!!!  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Really cute Balladeer..lol Marilyn should love this  [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-08-2000).] |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Wow Balladeer, How do you do this Sir?? You're not gonna let that lil' girl have some fun are you? LOL You Grampa you.. Enjoyed much |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Good Luck Marilyn And I can't wait to see her face with this Balladeer Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL....oh Balladeer, you're going to make her blush you bad boy you |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I understand how you must feel She probably tells you "Dad get real" Clear you put your thoughts in words of wisdom here She probably tells you "Dad have another Beer" To let go is hard to do But you gave her winds to fly and she wants it too Helmut Nice lol. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Another cute one Balladeer. LOL  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, very cute, 'Deer! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, I hearby vote you as poet laureate of Passions. Good job. Sy |
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Lisa Graham-Marshall Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 23Nottingham. UK |
"I could see my old man pacing the house as i read this!!" Loved it! Lisa. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL....Balladeer...it seems as though people are under the impression that Marilyn is your child...giggling....is there something we don't know?? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
MARILYN!!!! Do you know what time it is???? WHERE ARE YOU???? |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
LOL, this is excellent. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer - I'm with you on this one ..... where is she? She's gonna have some explaining to do ! ~Marge~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Here I am, Yes here I am Nothing went according to plan. He called me up, in the afternoon. Was stuck in Calgary, a business tune. I went out last night but was alone, I watched the ciy in a somber tone. Disappointment in my life, Has really caused me too much strife. I visted my second home, Coffee and a bookstore dome. Authors were my company, Two came home but not for free. A cold salad was my dinner mate, Can you truely relate? Balladeer where you friend? To make my disappointment end. My date was in Calgary on business and was supposed to arrive home Friday. He was delayed there and the date didn't happen. I had already made arrangements for my children so I went out alone. A poet once said that solitude and aloneness are two differnt things. Last night I was indeed very much alone. [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, Marilyn, I'm sorry, too. I know it meant so much to you. Hey, authors are always better lovers No dissapointment between the covers! Someday your prince will come along Until that time, keep yourself strong. There is one thing that makes me sad... These people think that I'm your Dad!!!!  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I see they think you are my dad, This also makes me very sad. I must confess,'Tis my delight To tell this tale and set them right. Balladeer is not my Dad, He is a friend, don't make him sad. He is for me, so much more, He makes my spirits soar. You see, I love this gentle man, He's always there to lend a hand. He picks me up when I am down, Makes me laugh when he's a clown. He knows my heart and loves my soul, He has purpose and a goal. He shines his light to all he meets. Sometimes he wants me 'neath the sheets :0 (Hey it rhymed!!..lol) [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn - Thank goodness you have been found. Not one to just let run around. Balladeer can now rest with ease ... and get on with his poetry. You've got to admit, he's quite a guy ... and you can't blame him when he tries. Balladeer - Great poetry. Great fun. The mystery is settled. Marilyn is home. What a guy ! |
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