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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-01-08 03:08 PM


Denise, Denise!

Denise, Denise
The blue of Irish eyes
Forget-me-nots of summer
Under Pennsylvania skies

Fill my heart with pleasant thoughts
That soothe and tranquilize
Brimming with a sparkling joy
The blue of Irish eyes

Denise, Denise!
With eyes of azure blue
Reflecting all the beauty
And the wondrous things you do

Showing all your loveliness
Smiling in the sun
Radiating warmth and love
And joy to everyone

Bluer than a blue lagoon
Or wing of butterflies
Captivating, mesmerizing
Blue of Irish eyes

Liz




[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-08-2000).]

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2000-01-08 03:15 PM


Elizabeth,
A lovely, lovely poem and I'm sure Denise will love it. You have a great talen that brings joy to all within it's reach. Love Sy

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-08 03:17 PM


Wow! Thank you Elizabeth, what a beautiful poem! I've never had one written about me before! I had a wonderful time meeting you today! I wish it could have been longer! But we will certainly get together again! I'll come to your house for some of that pie! hehehehehe!!!  You are a beautiful and gracious lady, exactly like the poems that you write!    Thanks again for the beautiful poem!  

 Denise


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2000-01-08 03:29 PM


Denise,
What a ball we had! Now we've got to find out how to get with Hoot. But do come as soon as you can.
My door is always open. I want my family to meet you so they can understand my fascination with Passions (and endless hours)
You are as sweet as your poetry
Love ya,
Liz

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-01-08 04:41 PM


Wonderful poem about a wonderful lady Liz!
I'm glad you two had the chance to meet with each other.  I think it's so great that we get to form new relationships from the most unlikely place. Who'd a thunk it would have been from a computer!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 2000-01-08 04:55 PM


Beautiful, beautiful tribute to Denise Liz...  
How very wonderful that you two have met!
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 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  
  

[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-08-2000).]

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 2000-01-08 06:20 PM


You - the poet's poet...

My friend...the poems you write for your friends are the most precious...

Well done! And Denise - you are most deserving.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
7 posted 2000-01-08 06:55 PM


What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady.  Well done Elizabeth.  
Balladeer
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
8 posted 2000-01-08 09:04 PM


You two are a winning quiniella, indeed!!
moonmoon
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since 1999-08-13
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9 posted 2000-01-08 09:28 PM



Wow, what a lovely tribute..

whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
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10 posted 2000-01-08 09:40 PM


What wonderful poem for a wonderful lady
Its so great that you two could meet I bet you had alot of fun , well done Liz  

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
11 posted 2000-01-09 08:58 AM


What a nice poem to a nice lady...we three definately need to get together some time
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-01-09 09:58 AM


Thank you all for your comments. This lovely poet, Denise, has been like a guardian angel, hovering over the forum, reading every single verse by every single poet. My hats off to her devotion to all the poets. (And besides that, she's got pretty eyes)

Hoot, we were discussing this yesterday. I'm going to study the maps, and we will make it happen.
Liz

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