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Angel: Wanted
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Angel: Wanted |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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My gorgeous angel above, I beckon thee to come. On wings of utter grace, I'll bid farewell this place. Blanket me in security, All my trust I put in thee. Make me forget my past mistakes, Make me forgive for heaven's sake. Erase my worldly fears inside, The lonely nights I laid to cry. Bring back passion to my life, Show me love without sacrifice. Be the one to make me whole, Bring completeness to my soul. Only then will I be free- To love such a man as thee. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devina, Hey Denina when your through with that angel would you send her around to me. Beautiful poem, enjoyed the read. Sy |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hah! This poem ain't about Toerag! He's a devil, not an angel. That leaves room for the rest of us (*patting down my hair and putting innocence in my eyes*). This was a very sweet poem, Devina. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yeah, we all could use someone like that, Devina. Well said (prayed?). Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
I could use an angel like that.  Wonderful poem devina. B Gravitt |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
devina . . . So beautiful . . . James |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh yeah Angels are special..... Shhhhh LongJohn....  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, Only a true angel could write like one. James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sy- Well I was sorta picturing a MAN angel, but if you want...LOL Maybe he has a sister for ya!?? LJ- The innocent look??? If you say so! Elizabeth- thanks for the agreement, if only it were as easy as wanting & getting!! Betty- Well when I'm done with him, SY already has 2nd bid ha ha, but I"ll be sure to pass on the word! James- Thank you dear, my- we do have alot of James in here now! (not that itsa bad thing!) Nan- I think you have a picture for everything hun, and a beautiful picture at that! James- What a romantic you are, and thank you... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is Beautiful Devina , Angels are a favorite of mine |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Let me add a beautiful, as well! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lord knows, we all need an angel at our sides! Lovely! Corinne |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Let me say thanks to you girls, now comes the hard part....waiting for that angel of mine!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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