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Meadowmuse
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0 posted 2000-01-06 09:56 AM



You've set down with your pen so well
what lovely verse can cause
when one can hear and taste and breathe
the breath your poet draws.

When one can feel his pulse, his heart,
flood far beyond the page,
draped warmly in his written art,
Night's nearing hand assuaged.

Dear LadyClaire


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Nan
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1 posted 2000-01-06 10:01 AM


Her words do sing a symphony, indeed....
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-06 10:07 AM


Indeed they do! Wonderful tribute to a wonderful poet!  

 Denise


whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-06 10:16 AM


She certainly is a wonderful poet, fitting tribute, well done  
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-01-06 10:23 AM


Dear Meadowmuse,
How lovely your poem!
And overwhelming!
Now, could you express that in a villanelle? (Only kidding)
I don't know how to thank you.
Your poem is truly lovely
Liz

Martie
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5 posted 2000-01-06 10:41 AM


Beautiful and well deserved
Elizabeth
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6 posted 2000-01-07 12:29 PM


I echo Martie! 'Tis beautiful, Meadowmuse!

Elizabeth I

 "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke
Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."



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