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Unconditional.......( A happy poem)
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Unconditional.......( A happy poem) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
For Chasca.......(my dog lol) Your deep brown eyes, Stare so intently at me, And I feel all of your love, I know its into my soul that you see, You understand all that I am, And all that I might be, You're always there, Whenever I am in need, Of a sympathetic heart, Or even just a hug, No matter what transpires, I know I'll always have your love, Through good times and bad, And through dark and light, When I feel safe and secure, And times when my heart takes flight, Because you are so very special, You are an angel to me, I'll love you till the end of time, Cause you'll always be a part of me. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is very sweet moonshine - glad you have such a friend!   K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply Severn, Yup - Chasca ( my dog lol) is a great friend. I luv her lots! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine this is a wonderful poem, give Chasca a hug for me ok What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply DA, It means a lot to me. Yep sure! I'll give her a great big hug for you : ) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem Moonshine , Dogs are great friends , My dog is my best friend , give Chasca A hug from me too |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nicely done - and the title is perfect too... |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply Whiskey, Yup Chasca is my best friend - she has been for a long time now. I will certainly give her a big hug for you : ) She sleeps on my bed next to me so I will give her one when I get into bed. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply and lovely comment Nan : ) Yep, I thought that unconditional would be a very fitting title cause Chasca does love me unconditionally ( probably cause I feed her lol) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Moonshine....dogs are great that way, aren't they?! Denise |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
I understand so well the love of your bestfriend! Great poem! Tamera |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply dsnyder, Yup - dogs are great that way! Chasca is awesome! Thanx for your comment. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply and lovely comment Tamera! |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great poem. I have a dog myself, they're great pets! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply and lovely comment CrazyChick! Yes - they are awesome pets! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem Moonshine! I can feel your happiness in this poem. And I love dogs too. I have a black laborador retriever named gypsy. And I love her too! Nathan |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I really enjoyed your poem Moonshine! My little dog Cedric, is my heart!!! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply Nathan, Yeah - I've been through some stressful times lately and Chasca ( cattle dog X cattle dog) was there with me. It's so amazing how animals just know....... WOW - a black lab! I love labs. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your reply and lovely comment Pepper : ) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Aren't pets wonderful |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Yep pets are awesome! Chasca is the only person ( yes person lol) that I trust totally lol |
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