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Unknown Poet
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since 2000-01-05

Posts 7
Sumner Washington

0 posted 2000-01-05 10:36 PM

Wilted Rose

I once had a rose
to beautiful to forget
that rose always glowed
until I had to pick it

Now that rose is fading
slowly going into my past
but my memory keeps on waning
until that rose turns to ash

I struggle for forgivness
for I made a bad mistake
that rose no longer wants me
for it seems that cruel is fate

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2000-01-05 10:41 PM

If we could only undo the things we do sometimes......lovely poem.

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

2 posted 2000-01-05 10:49 PM

Sometimes all it takes is an apology, have you tried? Good luck!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-05 10:55 PM

Welcome to Passions! Sad poem

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-01-05 11:13 PM

Welcome to Passions

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

5 posted 2000-01-06 12:16 PM

Welcome to passions. Nice poem. Looking forward to reading more.

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2000-01-06 12:20 PM

Pretty poem, and I love the meaning behind! Welcome to Passions!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 2000-01-06 12:33 PM

This is sad indeed, Unknown - Welcome to Passions. Mistakes can be remedied...

K

'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

8 posted 2000-01-06 12:33 PM

Sad poem, well all make mistakes and sometimes sorry is the hardest thing to say ,
welcome

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2000-01-06 08:31 AM

Welcome, Unknown Poet.... as distiinguished from "The Unknown Poet" who lurks among us as well.....

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2000-01-06 08:54 AM

Welcome!!

Unknown Poet
New Member

since 2000-01-05

Posts 7
Sumner Washington

11 posted 2000-01-06 07:41 PM

Thanks everyone! This was my first time letting the public see one of my poems and I was kind of nervous. Glad you liked it though!

Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

12 posted 2000-01-06 09:04 PM

"Time can not be bought back with silver and gold," favorite words of a song. Treasure all the time you have Unkown Poet, for it surley slips away. Beautiful,just beautiful. Have you said "I am sorry". Sometimes the simple little things works best.

B Gravitt

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