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Learning To Write |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA 
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Randomly I write Bound in boundless chains Lost maybe But I see where I'm going in life Not all can see Vision is not my strength Surely it is your stength? I am not making sence But I am not confused I write to let these words form If they were not formed What will they do? Will they restrain My random babblings? I think not. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I know how you feel, Jer!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
There's one good thing, you know where you're going in life, and that's something not a lot have a view of! Your poem is good also! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
You explained clear enough to me even though they really rhyme. Good job and continue to write the way that you want, as long as it satisfies you. Nathan |
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