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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-01-05 06:31 PM

Do you know
It's time for us,
To say goodbye,
Love has ended
with the broken hearts,
Shattered pieces broken,
No turning back ,
No coming back,
Do you know love has ended,
The sky is covered
with the dark clouds,
The stars was hidden,
It's gonna rain anytime,
You can see the pain
I'm going through,
No songs on the radio i hear,
No kisses ,no goodbyes,
no tears,no fears,
But you can see
the pain I'm going through,
Do you know ,
It's time for to say goodbye,
There,maybe ,
thousands reasons
why in the world we're so clam and quiet,
There are days that are short ,
There are nights that are long,
When you and I didn't say goodbye,
To eachother,
No goodbyes,no kisses,
no goodbyes to say,
No single moment we spend,
But do you know,
It's time for us to say goodbye,

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 2000-01-05 06:34 PM

Nice one Vandana... I liked it.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-01-05 07:01 PM

This is so sad! Goodbye without even saying a word..not sure I could do it...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-06 01:10 PM

A great poem, Vandana....sad but great! < !signature-->

Denise

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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2000-01-06 01:27 PM

Whew!, I thought you were saying good-bye to us! This poem is lovely, but good byes are always sad
Liz

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-01-07 06:03 AM

Yes that is a very painful time when you know its over, its not working out, and as you said so well no turning back and no coming back...cause its over. And now it seems like only pain is in our future. So true that we don't notice the songs anymore...the ones that are for lovers. Sometimes we forget that every beginning will have an end. I enjoyed the reality of this poem because life has its good times and bad times and this is definately one of those bad days. James

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

6 posted 2000-01-07 06:30 AM

Vandi!
Very touching indeed! Great poem!
love,
neitham

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

7 posted 2000-01-07 10:52 AM

vandana
This is so sad , But very good I like it

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2000-01-07 11:21 AM

So poignant, Vandana! And it is always a dark day when love ends, even if the sun is shining!

Corinne

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