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scattered moments of pleasure |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
never enough moments, between you and me, shared lives and laughter, my friend lots of laughter, oh how you make me smile. how are you and things in your world, do you know how your voice makes my head spin? how is your day, and are you working too hard, do you know how I love to look in your eyes, how they penetrate my soul how your touch makes my body react how your words hold pleasuring beyond comprehension? do you hear my voice quiver when you I need to please? do you have time to play, can you steal a moment for me? scattered moments of pleasure never enough of you… ok, if no new poems come to me, I will post an old one lol, but funny how rereading this, not a thing has changed...sigh remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
What lovely thoughts!! Very Nice!  ) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I really like this piece Iloveit! and I'm glad to see you back....you've been missed A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks rebel, and just think, I wrote this looking at a picture, imagine those eyes and that voice in person.....whew....I do... hugs  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Incredible words....so full of both longing and warmth. Great poem, lovey. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
my browser bogged down and pepper and Bal snuck in on me before I got back lol thanks pepper, was out for a few, and then uninspired to write now that I am back...glad you liked... Thanks Bal, your comments always mean much to me |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: Oh boy, did that jerk a memory or two..."do you have time to play" I wonder how many here are saying those words as we speak? Big HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Loved it before, love it still! *G* Never enough moments... Amen!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
No, there are never enough moments...but sometimes we have to take what we can find. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
RG, yep, I know... suthern will add an extra amen to yours hoot yep, I learned that...I enjoy each moment to the fullest |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Iloveit, Very good...I enjoyed this one, never enough moments..that rings true! Tamera |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree...this is wonderful! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...I can relate |
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