Open Poetry #5 |
In the Finding |
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
In the Finding Watching you as you watch me both of us enjoying the unstill, suspended moments between thought, word, action, question, response. Intoxicated, inebriated with the resonance of our pounding, ever mounting abyss. Fanned flames licking, lingering, flickering with this dazzling dance. Broiling veins full, willing, to touch, to take this chosen chance, as your moistened moans announce, you have found, fully, euphoria, in the surrounding, silent soundings of my kiss. Claire |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
OMG!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditto! Great poem, Claire! So passionate! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whooo Hoooo....me did like this one, uh hu, yep....speachless here |
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Dreamer_556 Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 34 |
I particularly love the way it flows. Great use of words! ~*Dreamer*~ |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Passionate indeed! I liked it! Tamera |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mike...I'm sorry...hope I didn't offend you. (or anyone else) Denise, Hoot Owl, Dreamer, Tamera, thank you all for your comments. Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
In the looking, I just found "In the Finding". I miss so many great poems it seems, and here is one. Very sensuous, my friend I loved this! Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Liz, for your sweet comment. So glad you "found" it (and enjoyed it!) Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
The imagery of two suspended in the throes of discovery ... exquisite. Just exquisite. Very, very nice, Claire. ~*Marge*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Marge...so nice of you to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, the throes of discovery...poetry in and of itself, is it not? Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Spice this one up a bit more and you'd be thrown into the adult forum little missy!!!LOL...This was a very passionate poem, I felt it the entire time!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
If things get any hotter than this In the Adult forum, I should be heading there. You are a wonderful weaver, I must seek out the rest of thy poems. Parker.... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow wow wow - freeverse at its finest ...excellent! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Devina, I hope it was alright posting it here. I've never been to the Adult Forum, as I wasn't sure I would qualify. *g* Thank you for your kind comment. Parker, thank you for your gracious words ...there is much to be woven into the tapestry of one's life. Severn, thanks for the enthusiasm...glad you liked this. Claire |
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