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sweetest sunset
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sweetest sunset |
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candace Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 14los angeles, california |
glistening water drops, drizzle deep beneath my soul mystical memoirs of colors, shattering the dark light vividly speaking, he walks closer to me glancing in my direction, causing a motion of satisfaction softness of his kiss, wetness of his embrace quivering insanity, echoing,defiantly within touch of his hand, slowly shadowing my face the longest touch, the sweetest embrace |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful poem  |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
You created wonderful images. I especially like the first 4 lines. Deborah |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, you definitely painted a lovely picture! Beautiful! Denise |
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cochav New Member
since 2006-10-11
Posts 1 |
Candace, That poem is awesome. jf |
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Marie777 Member
since 2007-01-30
Posts 93MI. |
Great work!! Hugs, |
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