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a new poet named justin
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since 2000-01-04
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0 posted 2000-01-04 08:37 PM




As I dream a dream of death and despair
I wish a long farewell
To last nights nightmare
A warm welcome to tonight's dream
Of hope and glory
To all I see

© Copyright 2000 a new poet named justin - All Rights Reserved
Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
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1 posted 2000-01-04 08:39 PM


short but long in thought...welcome to passionate.......Bojopy

 



whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
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Australia
2 posted 2000-01-04 08:43 PM


Short but sweet , welcome to Passions  
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-01-04 08:44 PM


Welcome to Passions. I am glad that you can see the hope of a new dawning. May it bring all the glory of the sun.



highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa
4 posted 2000-01-04 08:49 PM


Welcome, just be careful some of the people in here can be vary honest!!!lol The poem was great and I look forward to reading another soon
Justin Thyme
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since 1999-09-13
Posts 216
Oz
5 posted 2000-01-04 09:08 PM


Hey! Looks like there's finally a sane justin among us!

Welcome to the forums. Very touching sentiment in your verse here, m'friend! Looking forward to reading more... Seriously, well written verse. Thanks for posting it.

(Watch out for the other Justins and a bunch of Looney 'Toons in this place, btw! Justin Kace you didn't know, they could drive you bonkers!)
    


Deborah
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since 2000-01-03
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6 posted 2000-01-04 09:13 PM


I like the way you spoke so much in such few words.  Welcome to Passions, I joined yesterday so we are both rather new here!  Can't wait to read more of your poetry.
      Deborah

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
7 posted 2000-01-04 09:39 PM


Welcome!  I joined not too long ago, and have found this place to be most supportive!

Corinne

Justin Sayne
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 53

8 posted 2000-01-04 09:52 PM


Justin Kace you're a new poet named justin the Nick of Thyme - You'd better watch out for the other guys - Some of 'em think they're painters instead of poets... They're Justin Corrigible, though.... I'm the only painter here.... See - Here's a self portrait...

                      

Denise
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9 posted 2000-01-05 11:19 AM


Short but says much! Welcome to Passions, Justin!

 Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
10 posted 2000-01-05 01:47 PM


Welcome to passions  
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
11 posted 2000-01-05 01:54 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!!  Very short and to the point- I think we can all relate to this one!!! Except I don't get over my nightmares so easily...Yes..Ok.. I'm still scared of the dark!!!LOL!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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