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Kid Pedestal Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26Chandler, Arizona |
In the stillness of life, time moves by with The fluidity of death. Where the soul rupturing hand, which embraces Ones richest emotions, Is the same hand, which destroys them. Twisting the mind of his child-like-thoughts And burning through is intuitive nature, I remain calm. I remain stable while the world creates turmoil Around me…. And I just push it aside And live. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
great poem and welcome to passionate |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem Welcome to passions  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I liked this one! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. Your words hold much truth. Thankyou for sharing them with us. I hope to see more of your work in the future. |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Nice poem, you are lucky that you can push your way out of the turmoil, I always end up embracing the confusion and pain. I think it must be in my nature. Well writen poem, can't wait to hear more by you. Deborah |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to Passions - and what a powerful piece!  K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Powerful, well stated, good flow...I'm definately looking forward to reading more. Welcome to passions |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WRITE ON ! ! ! welcome, Paul |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Kid! I, too, enjoyed this! Denise |
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