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Morning's Pull
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Morning's Pull |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Morning's Pull The morning's pull, sweet sonnet mine, demands us rise and stir but for all of daylight's toil and tasks your lingering kisses blur into the farthest forest shades into the nearest night into the sounds of love we've made and sleep's seductive sleight. For evening wrapped us in its cloak and bade us share each breath with blood arising and our sighs defying midnight's death within our aching lover's hearts within sweet mystery's moans within this state of passion's grace where eternity's seeds are sown.  Claire |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
That is so beautiful , Wonderful poem  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ah, thank you Whiskey for reading and taking time for a comment. Glad you liked it. Claire |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Very nice meadow... and might I add what a lovely signature! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Local Rebel, thank you. Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautiful Meadow--your words are seductive and tender. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Martie, Suthern, thank you both for reading my work. So glad you like. Claire |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Awesome! I especially liked the phrase "your lingering kisses blur" Great poem! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Superb, Claire. It reminds me of each morning Lorelei and I share, and the lingering call of the night already spent and dying. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
jaxjoy, thank you for such an enthusiastic response. LngJhnAg, yes, it is a rather bittersweet morningtime feeling. Thanks for the encouraging comment. Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Superb, sublime, fantastic, wonderful, romantic....all those words! Great poem, Claire! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Denise, for such an enthusiastic response! Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I have to ditto all of the above  ) |
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