Open Poetry #5 |
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They're Wrong |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, ![]() |
Have I been unfair to you, Forced your life to change, Did everything come crashing down, With just a whisper of my name? You see me as the only one, That puts any faith in you, It breaks my heart to know, That your tears speak the truth. They overlook the person, That you try to so hard to be, Everything I love about you, They choose not to see. I watch the way your eyes fade, Away at the slightest touch, It's like you dont want me to know, That its hurting you this much. But I'm the only one thats took the time, To really look inside you, To fall in love with all the simple things, That I never imagined could be true. So please dont let the tears fall, From the words that are not true, I try to soothe your worries, By telling you I love you. I have tried so hard to show you, That your everything I love, But still thier words hurt you, I guess i havent done enough. Your a beautiful person, that's made me happy for so long, Please believe me love, When I promise you,they're wrong. [This message has been edited by amber (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
amber this is very hearfelt and lovely, though sad in it's own rights |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Amber, this is great, sad but wonderfully written! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nicely said...from a very pretty young lady with an obviously beautiful heart.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching and beautiful, Amber! Denise |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think we've all wished our love was enough to protect the one we love from all pain. *S* Beautiful poem, Amber... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Amber: This shines with so much love sweetheart.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I don't know how anybodi else feels but I believe your wonderful amber this is very hearfelt and needless to say heartfelt and very nicely told from an obviously beautiful (but maybe lonely) heart. naw i dont think so. Lucky |
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