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Bojopy
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0 posted 2000-01-03 08:50 PM




Blizzards have bloomed by the darkened window
And my sailors sense hears the scratching in its grow
Tap Tap tumble listens into my ears
And JESUS' liking tries to tremble my terrible fears
Let me in he says by just my faithful book
and give me a try or even just one more look


I wrote this after a nightmare I had or maybe just a calling.  Im not sure?

 


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-03 09:07 PM


Sounds like a calling to me. Something to think about!

 Denise


Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-01-03 10:05 PM


Interesting title...interesting poem.

Dear LadyClaire

whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-03 10:10 PM


I agree with Denise sounds like a calling  
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 2000-01-05 11:01 AM


Im with denise and Whiskey, sounds like a calling!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

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