Open Poetry #5 |
Last Light |
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Last Light Sail silently, my vessel stills the night Sail soundlessly, awake in timeless flight Sail through this life, sail through this life Sail sightlessly, for faith abandons sight. Night decries me, descending forces swoon Night skies, display my calling moon Night denies me, the futile fallen pneuma Night invites me, my spirit stolen too soon. Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Meadowmuse. So beautiful!< !signature--> Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-03-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Denise...glad you enjoyed it. Claire |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
yes, quite beautiful! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Echo, thanks for reading and taking time to let me know what you think. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely Meadow! In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I enjoyed. Very nice. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Martie, Mike, thank you. |
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