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The wall of doubt
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The wall of doubt |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The wall of doubt There is a door through the wall of doubt. And belief, is the one and only route. Work is the handle and this you must turn. And once through the door you will learn. Perseverance is the road you will tread. And this you will live, from bed to bed. Then when a new doors comes to view, You will know exactly what to do. T'was something taught by my mother and dad. And they by their mother and their dad. So on and so forth through generations And that has built countries and nations. I do not say it is always that way, But if we try hard, it very well may. There is one golden rule to use as a clue, Just do unto others as they would unto you. |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Sy, I think you pretty much covered it with this one; hard work, perserverance, kindness, and belief in yourself. That sure has worked for me. Nicely done. Thanks. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, The golden rule, such few words to guide one throughout life. They are magnificent words. Your poem is beautiful. Liz |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well Seymour there no DOUBT you can write. Very nice, Paul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Sy, So true are these words and what a wonderful Poem your very talented  Julie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mama Duck, So glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you for the nice comment. Liz, Can't think of a better rule, thanks for the beautiful. *L* Sy Paul, Thank you paul nice of you to say that. Whiskey, Thank you for the wonderful, your pretty good yourself. Sy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
The Golden Rule....one certainly to try to live by! This is a wonderful piece Sy... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
An excellent poetic portraiture of words to live by. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen, Sy. Words of the wise. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very wise words, Sy and so beautifully woven together! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. Enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great poem Sy and full of words to live by. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Thank you Pepper it is a good rule. *L* Meadow, Thank you for the nice comment. Denise, Thank you for the beautiful. *L* Michael, Thank you for the Amen, Amen. Mike, Thank you for the enjoy. Martie, Yes good words to live by. *L* |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Words to live by thank you SY.........Bojopy |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Definitely words to live by..another beautiful one...keep going!! Tamera |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wise words |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Have to echo Michael here: very wise. I like it...well done again. K...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Such wonderfully gentle words of warning as these must surely be heeded, from all perspectives. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're a wise man, Sy - I'm really happy to call you my friend..... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: Nice one!!! HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bojopy, Thank you Bo. Tamera, Thank you tam. Hoot, Thank you *L* Severn, Thank you *L* DE, Thank you much DE. Nan, And I am happy to call you love. RG, Thank you *L* |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Superb job!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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EnciNo Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 12 |
very true. liked the poem very much. |
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