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jaxjoy
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since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

0 posted 2000-01-02 09:20 PM

My conscience set me free to touch
the hollows of your soul and such.
Why dost thou abstain from me
and softly go thy sweet decree?
Tis oft I yearn to hear thy voice
to soothe and lull this heartbreak's noise.
Not a soul could bring such ardent splendor
with a touch, embrace so tender.
I walk alone with empty hand
weakened heart but strong I stand.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

1 posted 2000-01-03 01:02 AM

I hope I can say one day soon that I stand strong alone!!!

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2000-01-03 01:09 AM

Very nice, sometimes it takes alot to stand strong

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-01-03 01:14 AM

"weakened heart but strong I stand."
Very nice line

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2000-01-03 02:39 AM

Oh yeah, Jaxjoy!

Damned if I don't that THAT feeling! I loved the portrayal of this in your poem!

I've only recently relearned an important lesson on this...IF someone out there loves you, then one should stop pining for the one who never will!

For the one who never will never should have been in the first place!

Corinne

p.s. The rewards of loving one who returns that love with equal passion, well, honey, all I can say is: Oh My God! What a difference THAT makes!

Moi

jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

5 posted 2000-01-03 06:58 AM

thanks to all for your kind words.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2000-01-03 07:39 AM

Beautiful jaxjoy!! love the line "weakened heart but strong I stand"

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

7 posted 2000-01-03 10:46 AM

This is beautiful and bittersweet.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-01-03 01:58 PM

Oh, this is so beautiful! Very very nice!

Denise

jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

9 posted 2000-01-03 05:36 PM

Thanks for your replies

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