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She's got soul
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She's got soul |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This one is also in the spiritual section. I wrote this one in church while I watched a woman sing some soulful songs. I hope y'll like it. Her strong alto, filled the church with grace and she has everyone's attention. The look on her face, displayed lots of tension. She dug down deep within her soul and sang the song with all her might. She shined like gold, on this dreary night. I felt her pain and I felt her sorrow. She's got me crying to the Lord in vain, like there was no tomorrow. Yeah, she has a gift, as she reversed my flame to hot from cold. She has the power to uplift because, she's got that soul! Nathan |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the format you used with this one  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Uplifting! Denise |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
If there is one thing I envy is a good voice especially a soulful one.Enjoyed this Nate Paul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful Nate, To be able to sing in such voice |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. Lovely! ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great subject matter I love it! Liz |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you all for the lovely comments. Nathan |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Absolutely beautiful...I know a few people that have done the very same to me. I am definitely not one of those people to do it for someone else though. ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Echo! Nathan |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh I know this feeling to well.....Thank you for taking me there Nate. I enjoyed this to much Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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