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My Daddy And Me
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My Daddy And Me |
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Michael II Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 21Here, there, everywhere 
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My Daddy And Me I like to spend time with my dad. Cause I don't get in trouble when I'm bad. Except noisy dominoes make him mad, But when I'm with him I'm never sad. He taught me how to play chess. He still likes to play me unless I'm having a good day and I win, Cause then I really rub it in. He lets my play Ultima Nine. But I still wish we had Ultima On-Line. Cause we would play for weeks and weeks, Just a couple of computer geeks. I want to live with him someday. Cause there's so many games we play. But he still spends all his time with me. My daddy is my M.V.P. Happy New Year MikeyMouse |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A wonderful poem! It sounds like the two of you have a great time together!  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
awwww, I am glad to hear you have such a good time together!! Happy New Year! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
How ya doin' Michael Two? Sounds as though you're a poet too? Nicely done, and thoughts so grand, There's nuthin' better than a great old man. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Michael II This poem is so precious, what a wonderful son you are. Your Dad has every reason in the world to be proud of you. I hope one day you will be able to live with him also, I think it would be gratifing for both of you. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Michael II I am so glad you have such a wonderful relationship with your Dad. You both are very precious men in this world. I hope that someday you will be able to live with him too. Happy New Year Little Man!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Happy New Year MikeyMouse, and may that special dream of yours become a reality this year  Good to see you posting!! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
That's so sweet, I bet your dad loved the part about being your MVP, I know I did. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Mikey... I have to agree with you - Your Dad is a very special guy.... If I were he, and you wrote that poem for me... I'd put it in a very special place and read it every single day.....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael 11, Enjoyed the read, enjoyed the subject, enjoyed the poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Mikey, this brought tears to my eyes! Wow...MVP! I'll bet this brought tears to Dad's eyes too! Fantastic poem! Denise |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You Dad is a very lucky man Mikey Mouse. He has you and you love him so very much. My hope of you this year is that all your wishes become a reality. Great writing young man! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is a great poem, Michael II... and the love between you and your dad is wonderful!! Hope your new year is a very happy one!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful poem Mikey Mouse!! I hope your wish comes true for you and your dad real soon!! Happy New Year to you both..... btw....You've got real talent in your writing..love to read your work!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Aaawwww....Mike, this brought tears to my eyes. I think you and you dad are both very lucky to have each other and to love each other like you do. I hope that all your wishes come true in 2000. Great poem!! |
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Sylvester Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 16 |
I tawt I taw a puddy tat.... I DID - I DID taw a puddy tat...   |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, Mikey. Your daddy certainly is very proud of you. You are my M.V.P. as you already know. Perhaps I should post our M.V.P. poem so people would know just where that came from. Now, just because you wrote such a touching poem, don't think your getting anymore computer priveleges tonight! And don't threaten me with them dominoes either... Arghh, I don't think I can win this one. Daddy |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Aww! Mikey this was so very precious. It's wonderful to see Daddy and Son like this! I hope your wishes come true some day buddy, in the near future! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Vundebah job Mr. Mike!  ) |
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maedavid Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 24Carrollton, TX, USA |
 Great poem Michael II. I knew you had another poem just laying around wanting to be read. Good job!! I know your dad is so very proud of you. By the way, I love to play dominoes. Maybe someday we can play.The only way to know Love, is to Know God. [This message has been edited by maedavid (edited 01-02-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds to me like there are two lucky Michaels there.....make that three for letting me share your words. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Hey there Mikey my boy! My cutie!  Hey, I came in here, and was soooo happy to see another poem from you! Great job, like everyone else said! If you keep on writing and practicing, one day real soon, you're gonna be better than your daddy! LOL I think it's so cool that you like to write poems too! I love your picture too, BTW...I can't believe you don't have lots of girlfriends, but you're probably better off not messing with them just yet....girls are nothing but trouble! LOL I should know! hehe Just look at what's happened to your dad and me! I put a spell on him, and he's been mine ever since! (just kidding - no spell - just love...) We'll have to chat again real soon! ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Mikey, Arent dads just the best , sounds like you and your dad have a great time , wonderful poem well done |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Michael II This is such a wonderful poem, well done!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
It's nice to see such a bond between a father and son. I enjoyed every part of this. Thanks for sharing |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is such a neat poem you've written for your Dad...he sounds like a kewl guy! Thanks for sharing this! |
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Tweety Junior Member
since 1999-11-10
Posts 26stute, of insanity, Passions to be more |
 I'm outta hewe, see you watew. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
this is a keeper! I'd put this one in a safe place so you and your son can read it again in 20 years or so! Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ah the envy o this ole codger that such a youngin as you mikey stands at the forefront o life with such a talent for word wieldin o yuh i'm still buyin my kid lotsa poetry books yuh nothin yet..good for you!!! |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Mikey, you and your dad are awfully lucky to have one another...you did an excellent job in writing this poem...Well done!!! tamera |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thank you every one. I was up all night. Just to write this poem. Femme you are so funny I think I`m gonna burst out laughing right now. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.   Mikey |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You two sure have one heck of a relationship...so great to read and share...thank you! HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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