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Geo
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0 posted 2000-01-01 09:48 PM


Just a Note

My head is full of wonders
My mind just seems to roam
That is why I sit here
Writing poems

The feelings and things I write of
on paper for you to read
are the things that make my life
just wonderful for me

Now my mind is roaming
so I must let you go
to sit with pen and paper

To write another poem



 

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Astraea
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1 posted 2000-01-01 09:51 PM


Very nice.  Me like!

~Astraea< !signature-->

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



[This message has been edited by Astraea (edited 01-01-2000).]

Red
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2 posted 2000-01-01 09:51 PM


This is really cute, I like it!!!! I'd make you a little smiley face and say good job but I don't know how.lol  Keep on writing!!
)-----this will have to do----  )

Red
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3 posted 2000-01-01 09:52 PM


Hey.....How did I make those smiley face?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! nevermind.lol
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-01 09:57 PM


Cute! Welcome to Passions!  

 Denise


littleJas
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5 posted 2000-01-01 10:09 PM


Great poem , welcome  
whiskey
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6 posted 2000-01-01 10:12 PM


So cute , welcome  
Nan
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7 posted 2000-01-01 10:40 PM


Very cute, Geo..... Welcome to Passions...

Eloise
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8 posted 2000-01-01 11:47 PM


Enjoyed your poem Geo.  Welcome to Passions  
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-01-01 11:58 PM


Welcome to passions  
mama duck
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10 posted 2000-01-02 12:20 PM


Geo, Welcome aboard.   Chris
Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 2000-01-02 01:37 AM


Very good, welcome to passions!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Tamera
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12 posted 2000-01-02 02:23 AM


Very good, enjoyed!
Tamera

FreeByrd
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13 posted 2000-01-02 09:53 AM


Nicely done Geo.
Puts forth a pleasant feeling. Enjoyed.
Welcome
-RS

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



caroline
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14 posted 2000-01-02 12:10 PM


Welcome to Passions Geo    Lovely little entrance poem!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Paul Hoekman
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15 posted 2000-01-02 12:41 PM


Hey Geo, welcome aboard, this is a great place glad you found us,enjoyed your first poem looking forward to more,
            Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-02-2000).]

Marilyn
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16 posted 2000-01-02 12:52 PM


Welcome to Passions. A nicer bunch you will never find. We will be looking forward to reading more of your work.
Justbleu
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17 posted 2000-02-04 02:31 AM


This is sooo cute!!  I really liked this!!  Hope to see more of your poems!!  

Welcome to Passions!!

Take Care
Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."

WhtDove
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18 posted 2000-02-04 11:08 AM


Hey Geo! This was a neat little poem!  I see your getting the warm welcome of Passions!  
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19 posted 2000-02-04 11:16 AM


Geo, Welcome! Nice start! Will look for more! -SEA
Nate Dogg
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20 posted 2000-02-04 11:59 AM


Wow, so short and precise! That's just the way I like it!

 Nathan

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