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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca 
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Okay, I'm new here and I've spent the past few hours reading the lovely poetry that this site offers..... I've been here before a few months ago and submitted some poetry but I guess nothing ever came of it or else it just takes a long time? Anyways, I absolutley love this site, it's GREAT and I guess I just wanted to try posting something. Nothing ventured, nothing gained! Happy holidays by the way!!! SHATTERED Tiny fragements of glass, embed themselves here. Cutting. Tearing. Shredding. Ripping open and revealing, this lonely blood-soaked void. They have severed, the vein of love. They have pierced, the pulse of joy. Nothing left, but the persistant flow of blood. Dripping. Dousing. Drenching. The gleam of shattered glass, frosted in brilliant shades of red. Cracked. Broken. Unrepairable. Blood seeps from the core, my heart. "I am become death, shatterer of worlds." Robert J. Openheimer |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
So Sad , Very well done , Welcome  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Red! Great poem! Excellent imagery! Denise |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Ouch! And you seemed so cheerful at first, Red. Can't wait to see what you post when you're miserable. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
What a lovely poem and it hits so close to home, too. Welcome to Passions! Very nice. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Good poem with some great imagery. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
Thank you oh so kindly for the feedback everyone and Ted------ I am a happy person and rarely miserable (outwardly anyways)... poetry and music are the only places, it seems, that I have to vent!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Red: Sounds like you're in need of a hug, so: HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Red - Nice to have you with us...  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 01-01-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions...you got some pretty vivid imagery going on there |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Hi Red, Are your name and this poem related? I know many of us have felt this level of heart shattering pain. You've captured the agony well. Very nicely done. Chris |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wonderful poem, and welcome to passions! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Very nice work Red. Very vivid! Wecome to Passions. . . |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Red, Good paint, nice job, well done, welcome. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Terrific imagery Red.....Nice work! Welcome to Passions!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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