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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2000-01-01 08:51 PM

"Love away"

As I sit and think of you
I wonder what it is you do
That happiness you give to me
Your heart it shines the light I see
It gides me too the right of life
And keeps me safe and out of strife
Your face I long to look and see
The day your here beside of me
Untill that day I feel within
The dreams of you upon my skin
The biggest smile you will recieve
That first moment our eyes do meet
Months will pass and I can wait
To see you come through that gate
I know not long you will stay
Then my love you'll take away
Back to your home in foreign land
Again to long for my man
One thing you will leave with me
And that be sweet memories

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-01-2000).]

littleJas
Junior Member

since 1999-12-22

Posts 39
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-01 09:33 PM

Very Nice

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-01 09:33 PM

This is beautiful, whiskey! Very very nice!

Denise

far and away
Junior Member

since 1999-12-17

Posts 20

3 posted 2000-01-01 10:04 PM

Very nice poem! I hope to more of your poems in the future!

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

4 posted 2000-01-01 10:09 PM

Another lovely one.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

highwayman
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

5 posted 2000-01-01 10:39 PM

becareful what you wish for, sometimes it comes true and others they don't. You never know, when you do get this men in your arms he just might not want to leave.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-01-02 12:17 PM

I really hope it all works out as you want it to Julie, wishing you both the best

Kelylee
New Member

since 2000-01-02

Posts 2
California

7 posted 2000-01-02 12:24 PM

Brought tears to my eyes...as I too have someone I want...who lives so far away. Thanks for showing me I am not alone

Kelylee

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2000-01-02 12:29 PM

Whiskey,
I'll drink to that one.
Nice job, nice poem. Sy

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