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The same old games
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The same old games |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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After everything we have been through, After all the time that has passed, I thought I had your honesty, You owe me at least, that. I know that I recieve, So much of your time, But if you want your space, Tell me and its fine. But dont leave me to wonder, About where you want to be, When I'm waiting here to see you, And everyone thinks your here with me. Happy New Year baby, The same old games agian? I thought you outgrew them long ago, And it all haas changed since then. I guess my resolution, Would be to hear no more lies from you, Where are you now my love, If you love me, tell the truth. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Amber, it's so sad, but so well put. I can appreciate your heartache. The lies are never the real problem, they're merely smoke screens trying to hide ones guilt. God is my refuge and strength. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very sad. Denise |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very sad, but very true sometimes. Very nicely done. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Georgia Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 32 |
amber i love that poem...from one so young! that is truly the sentiment of many on this occasion...wondering why the love of a persons life is not with them! And wanting only the truth! keep writing..i know how you feel.. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
hey do you know the same person I know?? =o) Describes how I have felt before, and sometimes still do. Great poem! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
thanks to everyone who commented on my poems. And Keeper, once agian i am glad to see you've taken the time to understand and read my poetry, thanks so much! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Amber, this piece flows with the air of experience. Makes it very believable. Reminds me of a dark torch song. Nicely done.  Claire |
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