Open Poetry #5 |
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It Always Takes Two (repost!) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It always takes two Lightening and rain To create a spectacular thunder It always takes two To make a couple And three to tear it asunder. It always takes two, A child and God To teach an adult to pray. It always takes two, Morning and night To create one whole day. It always takes two To start a fight That then becomes a war. It always takes two Any two at all To know what we're fighting for. It always takes two A reader and poet To put magic in what we write It always takes two Just you and me To do what we think is right. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Another well written masterpiece from one of my favorite writers. ![]() Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Helpless New Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 5 |
Wonderful poem! I love it. Keep up the good writing! Helpless |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Amen! This is wonderful, Sharon! ![]() Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well done, and so very appropriate for the moment. TY Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauds....wonderful ![]() |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
You're right, and I will do what I think is right *clapping* beautiful poem! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
One and one makes quite a pair..... I always did love yours..... I'm smilin'... ![]() |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Encore! Wonderful Devine! Just wonderful! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Very neat, very sweet. This is one poem I will try to remember (in an already over-crowded mind.) But may I gently disagree with only the last stanza -- to do what's right only takes one. |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Another great piece ![]() This too needs to be put on top for all to see. Thanx for sharing. Joel |
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