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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
In a bleak November autumn mist, with haze of amber hues My lips touched by a crimson kiss That pulled me in the muse Through day's and years I fair the well Bound by bitter ties As a captured bird with wounded wing That kept me close at side Singed, by verse my ears were cursed With all as black as night As darkness filled the hollow hull And took away my sight Drunken by the empty lies That slivered from your tongue I felt my life get swept away As line and verse were one Tori 2000 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori, these are sad but so well written. And touch the heart! Well done my friend! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
enjoyed very much, Tori. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori- I really enjoyed the flow of this. Seemed to follow the path of a tear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I've got one word for you my friend...thinking!  May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well done, indeed, Tori! Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Very interesting...and well put  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well written tori At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
love the last line tori very nice! |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Dove, Balladeer, Marge, Nicole,Denise,One Who,Ruth and Walt..Thanks so much for the kind words glad you like this one.. Nicloe....Really Glad to hear your thinking!! ~~~~~~~~~~ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice work, tori..... and if November is bad, try January and February, eh??? |
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