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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Just call me I'll come running When you want me near. And I'll be there to hold you And wipe away a tear. No matter what may happen Or where you choose to go. You can always count on me But this you already know. Go out and discover who you are And do what you have to do. But just remember a mother's love Will always be there for you. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I like this it is nicely written, reminds me of the phrase It you love something, set it free. Which is definitely what parents eventually have to do but nobody ever said it was easy. |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Eloise, Of course this one made me cry. Very beautiful, and the thought of letting go is so scary....but you are right, we as parents will always be there to wipe their tears..A mother's love is unconditional, endless...Thank you for sharing this!  Tamera |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've captured the heart of a parent in this wonderful poem! Lovely, Eloise! Denise |
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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 18 |
Eloise,I lost a daughter a few years ago,andI must say this is a very touching poem,everyone feelsa little different when they write, but this will be i9nspiring to alot of people in all age groups. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you septsong, and Tamera you are absolutely right about that. And as long as they know there is that unconditional love makes it a little easier for them as well. Denise, thank you once again. Agony, I am so sorry for your loss. I send you a big {{{HUG}}} Welcome to Passions. And thank you for the comments. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So true a Mother's Heart always loves..will always be there.. Agony, how sad I am for your loss, there is no greater loss than a mother losing a child. ((HUGS)) from one Mom to another.. At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Oh the love of a parent,Now that I'm a dad I better undestand why my mother always seemed so crazy to me. Thanks Eloise. Paul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful peom I am yet to be a parent but I know mine are always there for me |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My same sentiments, but so beautifully expressed Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Very beautiful, your child(ren) should be proud and blessed!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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