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May your world in 2000 be all you want and all you dream
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May your world in 2000 be all you want and all you dream |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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It starts off inside warm soft and very slow < !signature-->brings life to our words and makes them flow love and friendship start from a tiny fragment words from the heart good wishes truly meant We take so much for granted but all our emotions live in tiny pockets and swim the deep wide oceans till they reach out and hug you oh so tight I feel it so much and know it is so right The touch between us all the way we each respond wiping away each other's tears the way we correspond the gift of time that is so precious to each of us how we take life on the chin and make so little fuss So my small way of saying thank you to each of you letting me see your world from your point of view for all the hugs the love the support and the smiles makes my time here on PIP so very worthwhile May your world in 2000 be all you want and all you dream and if they don't come true perhaps it wasn't a team we all hope of a love that makes our eyes shine with delight and when that happens our hearts will know it is right... HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-30-1999).] |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Rainbowgirl, I have tears in my eyes and a smile on my face. What a wonderful tribute to all your friends here in PIP, may 2000 be all you want it to be and more. If I could reach through this screen and hug you, I would this very second...Hugs to you, and Happy New Year!!!  Tamera |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My dear friend this is one of your best! Thank you!  |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
wonderful rainbow i have really enjoyed your poems.they have touched me deeply. i wish you rainbow a very happy new year filled with good health,happiness,god's blessings and good luck in 2000 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I wish the same for you my friend |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless you..  Tamera: Your hugs are felt sweetheart...screens can feel husg and softness ...true, they can.. HUGS PDV: You are most welcome, it's a priviledge to know you.. HUSG CJS: And a wonderful year 2000 to you and my nephews and neices... HUSG Hoot: Aren't we soppy...LOL...but I guess that's females for you..*g* always loving, always giving and never afraid to do so either.. HUSG Elizabeth: If you read this, this is for you, my translation won't be as good as yours but it answers your question on an earlier poem.. Por el amor de una mujer jugué con fuego sin saber que era yo quien me quemaba bebí en las fuentes del placer hasta llegar a comprender que no era a mi a quien amaba. Por el amor de una mujer he dado todo cuanto fuí lo más hermoso de mi vida mas ese tiempo que perdí ha de servirme alguna vez cuando se cure bien mi herida. Todo me parece como un sueño todavía, pero sé que al fin, podré olvidar un día. Hoy me siento triste pero pronto cantaré y prometo no acordarme nunca del ayer. Por el amor de una mujer llegué a llorar y enloquecer mientras ella se reía rompí en pedazos un cristal dejé mis venas desangrar pues no sabía lo que hacía. Por el amor de una mujer he dado todo cuanto fuí lo más hermoso de mi vida mas ese tiempo que perdí ha de servirme alguna vez cuando se cure bien mi herida. HUGS< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-30-1999).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You friendship door has always been so wide open with no screen needed, thank you for that and for this poem. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too wish the same for year my friend. Happy New Year and thanks for the wonderful poem and friendship. You are a gem. Happy New Year. ((HUGS)) At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow, La poesia de usted es muy bonita, assi como esta cancion. Que linda las musicas de mi querido Julio! I love the way you love, Rainbow. Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Such a lovely poem from such a lovely person! Have a wonderful New Year, Rainbow! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
What a sweet poem! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
May it be all you want, also, dear Rainbow . Thank you for everything you are and represent..Best of all wishes to you |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Rainbow, your friendship and willingness to extend friendship has meant much to many people here, myself included. I hope your year 2000 will surpass even your wildest expectations and your dreams be as beautiful you are. ((((Hugz)))) Happy New Year!!!  Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Rainbowgirl Defender o all smileyfolks like me thankythanky |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
May everything you wish for be yours in the coming year, RG.... Great poem...  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Happy 2000 to you Rainbow.....may this new year bring you the best of everything...... Love your poem  |
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maedavid Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 24Carrollton, TX, USA |
I really like the way you said that our emotions live in tiny pockets and swim the deep wide oceans. That is really graphic. I have to look back on my life with some sadness because of the times I did not take the time to share with others as I should have. The poets here at PIP share so much of themselves through their poetry. I love it. Happy New Year to all of you. The only way to know Love, is to Know God. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree with pep, those two lines were classical. The rest of the poem is just terrific and a true testament of your wonderful talents. May God bless you! Nathan |
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