Open Poetry #5 |
A Single Tear |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A single tear fell to the ground, As he tried to stifle sound, Of sniffles that came not from cold, And in fact, if truth be told, Would cry out loud, if was alone, Instead of acting like a stone, Reached in his pocket as he wept, For rumpled hanky that he kept, "I've got a cold," was heard to mutter, "Or maybe allergies," went on to stutter, "I'm sure that's true," said wife with smile, While she giggled all the while, "I know no reason that a feller, Would cry because just saw "Old Yeller."" [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-31-1999).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh yeah??? Well... I cried when I saw "Bambi" too.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL......I cry at the kleenex comercials, my son looks at me like I'm nuts |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Awwwwww...how touching! And funny too! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Yeah well I cry when Eeyore loses his tail LoL...cute poem! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
There is nothing wrong with a good cry!! Men included!! My famous recent cries would be 'Deep Impact' and "steel Magnolias'. A good cry refreshes the soul. And my husband looks at me like I'm mad too Ruth!! Well done!! At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. Lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great poem ! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
A moving poem that made me smile! What's wrong with crying over a sad movie? Doesn't everyone? Well, if not, then they should. I certainly do. |
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