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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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"Seeing You" How long I knew inside This person you did hide No picture I knew No vision of you My mind it did see Wonder , Beauty Of you I learned Yourself I yearned Warm heart within you Shone from you Your soul it showed me love Your heart it took my breath away Your face I finally see How beautiful to me More I want you near You I love so dear [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 12-30-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Whiskey! So nice!  Denise |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Another pretty one! Lovely! ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WOW! Like Butter! Keep them coming,Paul |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you all for your kind replies |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely poem Lovely thoughts Lovely poet Liz |
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