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Open Poetry #5

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adam
Junior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 10
BFE

0 posted 1999-12-30 06:28 AM

once, as i traveled under heavy
dark clouds.

i heard a feint voice,and it grew
ever loud.

it sang me a song,about my regret

and whispered of people, that i have not met

it kept love in my heart,through
out my dark time.

soon the clouds broke apart,and the sun started to shine.

by
Adam Clarke Roberts

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 1999-12-30 08:02 AM

This is great Adam, but was ahrd to read cause of the color!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

U K Hero
Member

since 1999-08-08

Posts 266
England

2 posted 1999-12-30 08:29 AM

capitals aside, I thought this was a tremendous piece

[This message has been edited by U K Hero (edited 12-30-1999).]

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 1999-12-30 08:48 AM

Beautiful poem Adam so hard to read the colour so light ,

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-01-08 05:29 PM

Enjoyed. Nice poem.

Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

5 posted 2000-01-08 08:09 PM

Adam I like the poem. Never stop trying.

B Gravitt

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-01-08 08:24 PM

Adam -
I found this to be lovely.
Absolutely touching.
Keep it up.
Welcome to the doors of Passion's.
Enter often.
Love ~Marge~

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