Open Poetry #5 |
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A hole heart |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
I gave you my love, When I gave you my heart, And it had all the pieces, Right from the start. But when you gave it back, I noticed some holes, Did you keep those parts, For your own little goals? If thats the case, I want them back, So I can be whole, And know how to act. You've still got my love And you've still got those parts, If you'll take me back, You can have back my heart. You can give or take, But eather way you go, I want to be happy, I want my heart whole. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the idea behind this one...I'm not sure our heart can ever be totally whole again after being broken though |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Im with Ruth on this one! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem , Ive not seen this one before |
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