Open Poetry #5 |
Oh Yuh! |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Just musing at the gray skies Feeling little i made a fist Swinging swinging swinging But for nothing i always missed I went running in for a ladder Childhood freedom takes me high Most ladders only have five wrungs But this one reached up to the sky On my journey i had brought up A light bulb of a billion watts But there the sun i looked too long And now all i see are dots If there's a moral to the story The connection between the dots If the sky is mostly cloudy Might just be your dreary thoughts [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-29-1999).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh yuh!!!! You are right about this Walt! Good one...love your style, ya know! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I enjoyed this, simply fun! Paul |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes you need a ladder that goes "wayout", ya know??? |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Great style , wonderful Julie |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Oh yuh??? WEll, I agree!! Great poem!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh yuh??? You don't say? We'll I tend to agree with your cloudy thoughts on this one Smiling, nicely done Walt |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Oh Yuh!! thanky yuh all |
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