I felt it all erasing me......

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Open Poetry #5

I felt it all erasing me......

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-10 11:38 PM

all the pretty things are free
feel the rise ..isolate me
raise the expectations high
drown that ghost
and never question why
make it feel incomplete
give a reason
present defeat
judge the fallen
become intense
spread your everything
but wear it all underneath..
simple pleasures never mine
im the TYPE of empty person
that wont survive the test of time..

Alias
Junior Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 30

1 posted 2000-02-11 12:01 PM

Great Poem Jackal. I don't really know exactly what you are feeling here but i know you'll get through it, time that is.
Alias.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2000-02-11 08:32 PM

I like your style Jackal, look forward to reading more ...keep smiling.......Roniece

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