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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
Love is everything and yet it is so small, i wonder if love is even love at all? My head's a swirling cosmos, of thoughts and wants and gains but when i think of all the good.... i think of all the pains. Yet when i make a single call, i know my love is true- cos' Bec, you're everything to me and i know that i love you. [This message has been edited by Alias (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
How lovely! I'm sure she's a lucky girl to have someone like you.  Good job. Welcome to Passions.~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Welcome Alias walking the highwire is an easy and enjoyable task when the the net of love is there for us when it's not ... man O' man that's a long thin line! Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Alias, lovely poem, Bec is a lucky girl! Welcome to passions! < !signature-->What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I do hope you shared this with her...welcome to passions |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. Please check your email for something special!  |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Welcome Beautiful poem She is a lucky girl |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
What a wonderful tribute...  )Very tender... Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Alias! This is so sweet! Denise |
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Katie-Scarlett New Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 7 |
Words that everyone wants to here... well done. |
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binky_bec New Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 7 |
LOVE answered....... why? i hear you ask that i love you with all my heart? this question i will answer though i'm mot sure where to start. love was an expression of which i use to criticise i never knew what it was like it was vacant in my life. but then i met that person and my doubts were born anew i had finally fallen in love with that person who is you your personality is warm you make me smile and sigh if only i could tell you but undoubtingly i try your voice is my saviour my unrelenting dream is to have you to hold so i can let my feelings free it upsets me to hear you ask why that special one is you i sit and stare for hours because I know my love for you is true i don't know how to tell you in a way you will accept you've brightened up my life and for that i am forever in your debt my love extends beyond description i can't express the way i feel frustration often takes it's toll i'm not sure how i deal forever i will love you forever i will yearn to always have you near as long as the stars do burn but i myself have questions to ask just why it's me you have chosen to love what seems unconditionally i am nothing special i'm really rather plain i don't agree with compliments i am nothing special to gain forever i will wonder if that dreaded day will ever come upon me the day your heart is taken away Forever yours Bec |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
Bec you're wrong, you're everything. "nothing special" is a lie- You've made my day, you've made my life and now you've made me cry. My heart is here for you to hold A risk I'm game to take- cos my love is real, forever... In your hands my heart is safe. You're the reason i wake up every day- The reason i survive. But if your love should ever leave I'm sure that i would die. Bec there is no way to say how i feel. the words simply don't exist. Nothing i could ever say would fully express my feelings for you, i love you so much. Bec, you'll always be the most important person in my life. I'm the luckiest guy alive when you say that you are mine, I think i'll use another wish; won't you be my valentine? yours forever, Thomas XOXOXOX [This message has been edited by Alias (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
Hi. Nice poem, only one suggestion; lose the word BUT in the 3rd verse. How about Yet, when I make a single call ? I love the rhyme(my forte, even though the critics pan me for it !LOL) like the little on-line love affair you and Bec have going on... Jocelyn |
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Alias Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 30 |
Thanks again everyone for the comments, special thanks to you Jocelyn the help was much appreciated... Bec, everything you do and say is just beautiful.. i really wish that we can be together forever.. I'm just another guy. A guy who loves you more than anyone else. Thomas |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very nice Thomas. it's Egg here by the way. It is a very touching poem. Good work. |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
awwww this is soo sweet i think im gonna cry ! hehe |
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