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Mars
Junior Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-02-06 04:09 AM

In this world of hands
        And the incessant demand
          For touch,
           I stand amazed
             That more of my ilk
                Don’t announce
                 This preoccupation
                   In the manner of other
                    Pleasured parts.

                      For there is a coarseness
                        Of desire
                         Enjoyed by and
                          Reserved unto intimates,
                           That quashes
                             The politically correct
                              And travels direct
                               Non-stop to where
                                The hands
                                   With
                                   The blood-red
                                     Nail polish
                                      Touch me.

Mars

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

1 posted 2000-02-06 04:13 AM

Lovely poem.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

clementine
New Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 1

2 posted 2000-02-06 04:43 AM

Enjoyed the read.

Patrick B
Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 58
uk

3 posted 2000-02-06 07:05 AM

Interestingly different

hello darkness my old friend

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2000-02-06 07:36 AM

She didn't slap you across the face, did she? Only kidding!
Well presented poem
Liz

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

5 posted 2000-02-06 11:14 AM

Hi Mars ~ Neat observational/personal piece. I enjoy your propensity for including sometimes unexpected detail in your writing.

Take care,
Claire

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-02-06 11:32 AM

Oh...I like this a lot. Interesting presentation

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-02-06 04:25 PM

Touch, I believe, is one of the best ways to communicate love! Beautiful poem!

Denise

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