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*BitterSweet Longing*
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*BitterSweet Longing* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Seeing you in my mind, Feeling your presence on my skin, Shadows of your smile fading- Into the very clouds above my head. Is there no hope- No beginning at the end? For me to need you, Lies heavily upon my soul- Such a feeling, Never felt before. The light grows very dim, On the inside of my heart. Never will that brightness come again, Burned out for all eternity… And deeper as each day passes. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad and very beautiful, too. Hang in there! A new light will be shining soon! Denise |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Such sadness...it is always hard to lose someone, but all things happen for a reason. I'm sure the light of your life hasn't shined on you yet. |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Sad but I can relate. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina- You've much to say ... and you say it well. Smile, pretty girl. The brightness will come again. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
The light shine's brightly for you, you just haven't reached it yet, but when you do it will last forever. Tracie  keep smiling |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, I feel for you. You are so sweet, you will find happiness again. If I was there I'd give you a big sweet hug, and a wet kiss, to help you forget for a little while.  Parker |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Oooooh....wow... Surviving...it's how we go on... Thank you for sharing...  ) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, this is so very sad  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
If I would have a light It would shine on you If I would have a song It would be singing it for you If I would have a man I would send him to you I'm sure there is one on his way to your heart already How do they say at Loreal "Because you worth it" The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I want to thank you all for your kind words...maybe the light will shine again!!! James- you are my knight in shining armor love!!!! Maybe I'll take you up on that one day!!!  Helmut- I'm soo glad you stopped in, I've missed you- good friends are hard to find...I'm glad I found you dear!!! Please keep in touch...my email is always open!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I would send you a mail or two if I would know the adress, unfortunatley the mail address is not displayed anymore. Visit my web site and drop me a line and I shall answer The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Easy as done m'friend!!! (just in case ypur supposta be workin and check this agian!) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
What can I say .. I know how you feel; and I feel for you and what your going through. But your poety is the light for so many others; you must know that! It is for me! I love reading 'you'. My prayers are with you .. and have been every day since we talked last! Paul |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow good job, and how sad...and yes so many of us can relate....you said it perfect |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Keep that heartlight burning lady! It will be a beacon for that special person out there who is seeking light to guide him to you. As always, your writing is so good and with such feeling. DH |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice Written!!!!!!! |
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