Open Poetry #5 |
Destiny |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
My friends, I know that I have been gone for a while, I have met someone. . . my destiny. . . last week here in the US. . . we have been corresponding and talking for 7 months now. . . and last week, I couldn't take it any more and got on a plane at the last minute to go to be with her. . . I wrote this on the plane before it took me to her side. . . Tomorrow I shall meet my destiny The woman of my dreams made real Tomorrow together we'll finally be Then I'll be able to tell her how I feel. We'll be shy at first, unsure of what to say. Face to face we'll finally be. But sometimes, the best of friends start that way, We'll just have to wait and see. So now, here I sit on the plane Waiting to be carried into the stars. Finally, an end to this pain. For I will soon be where you are. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Great poem How did it go? Richard |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done... I hope your meeting went well... *S* |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Sven, well now that we know where you disappeared too, you have to tell us how it went Glad to hear things are going well and glad that you are back!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, was wondering where you've been wow, so glad you've met your destiny, so happy for you. All the best to both of you. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This poem is so sweet I hope your meeting went will Perhaps destiny one day I will meet Then I'll have the same story to tell Good luck to you Sven. I wish you the best as you embark into a new adventure. G |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Oh, I am so EXCITED for you! I am still waiting for that visit from Destiny -- when you get finished, you think I could have old Destiny's phone number? Good luck my friend, and God bless ... --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm glad you met your destiny and it went so well Sven. You deserve true happiness. (HUGS) of happiness and understanding Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sven, That takes guts! I've known three couples so far that met in person after oodles of hours online and on the phone...Two of them are still together... Hope it is all you dreamed, nice poem, too! Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Enjoyed the poem, wish you the best. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sven what a beautiful poem. I hope it all turns out just great for you. All the best tracie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It did indeed turn out very well. . . she's so wonderful. . . I will tell more in Feelings when I have an idea of what I want to say. . . thank you all for your support. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I am so happy for you and even happier at all the romantic poetry this should spark |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very wonderful writting. Glad all went well....... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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