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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Early morning rainstorms dampen sun fires tepid gaze cloaked in gray the open sky grieves crying gentle pattern drops across autumn colored leaves... I saw you standing beneath my tree scarce of shimmering gold and fiery crimsons branches nearly bare of it's living cloak lying at rooted feet as winter beckons... Leaves fall in lazy spirals like carmel rain "Come back to me" whispers kneel at your feet carried upon the wings of desolate butterflies to be crushed beneath your retreating boots my destruction unseen by carefully blinded eyes... Breathe~ September 99' |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ Your imagery is simply stunning in this piece. Welcome to our family of poets and friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Thank you Marge..I'm happy you like...  )It's wonderful to be here...amongst so many talented people... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Breathe, Welcome! Great way to start things off! This is beautiful. Hope to see more soon.........  -SEA |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Breathe! This is so beautiful! Great imagery! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Sea.. Thank you...thank you... )Your encouragement is so appreciated... *smiling..smiling...smiling* Denise... Thank you for the card! I do have to say that this is a very friendly forum...and you all are wonderful...thank you for making me feel welcome... Denise aka. Breathe~...(seems we share the same name..*grin*) |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
what a beautiful poem. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well, glad to see you made it! Welcome to the family! Lovely poem to make an entrance with! Please feel free to ask anyone for help if you need it.... we're all here for you...  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Welcome Breathe~ what a sad song you've sung and it was so well written I had to smile  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful poem to srart your voyage into passions Welcome! Liz |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Catwoman, Rex, and Elizabeth...thank you...I'm glad to be here... )Poet DeVine...Thank you for finding me... ) This is a real nice place you got here... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep, have loved everyone of your poems, really like the way you write |
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