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Rendez-vous |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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I try to write a comment and it did not show so I will try this to see if it shows Rendez-vous To tell the truth About this life On earth so bound Creation in rage Laughing About the end Near at hand Grabbing my feet Touching the ground With simple words For simple mind My tongue is twisting Love To make it last Longer than it should Afraid to miss All the fun we had With you and me In heat for beast Created in sin To be cast out From heaven the prize Eternal bliss Reach my soul Before it sinks In the spring Of his words Feeding my hunger For more to come I bathe my soul In the lust of your eyes Searching for peace Lasting long enough To satisfy my impatience Mourning For death Come soon At my rescue So I won't sin No more With your tongue In my mouth Reaching for life Everlasting Sweet monique |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Welcome monique This is a lovely first post as always you write with your total soul We look forward to more  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice first post...welcome to passions |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Thank you for the welcome words I read a few poems and I feel A loving gentle spirit In this place monique |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Monique- Welcome to Passion's. Your intuitive feelings are correct. There are many gentle, loving spirits that reside in this place. Glad to have you join us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice monique it sounds like a very interesting meeting. James |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
Welcome Monique, beautiful poem |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem.Welcome to passions. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Monique!!!!!!!!!!! Oh I am so glad you came over here..... you will love it and feel most welcome. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lovely. Enjoyed your work alot! Welcome! |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Rex, I love your fish symbol. Robert, well guess who invited me to Passions in Poetry? And everybody as important as the one I named, you make me feel all warm inside. I bow to your gentleness toward me. monique |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Lovely poem. I like it. I will now echo everyones' heartfelt welcome with no less emotion. Welcome to Passions. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow, lovely doesn't encompass this, this is incredible....have been there....great job!!!!! |
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