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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I want cool breezes and fingertips tracing circles of goosebumps on my back in mindless repetition. Warm soft lips, baptizing me like summer rain dropping on a sweaty, wondrous, child, eyes shut tight, arms spread wide, dancing in circles dizzy with life. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That sounds good to me too! Lovely, lighthearted piece! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
you are an amazing writer serenity you style almost gives me de ja vu it's like i've seen it before eons ago Rex }<{{{{o> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rex Allen, Rex Allen, now you have made serenity blush...thanx to you and "d" for the moral support. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now THIS conjures up images of sensuality personified. Great piece of writing here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! The simple life of childhood. Well done! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely wonderfully written. This one likes me much  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Our needs haven't changed much have they? love it.latearrival |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Such joyful regeneration! Thank you. I feel your heart throwing stars into the universe... |
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